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GOOD POINTS:
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Creates
a good atmosphere
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Stays
intense
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Both
characters were shady and are kept anonymous. Keeps audience on their seat and
wants them to know
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Black
and white creates an interesting effect
IMPROVEMENTS:
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Music
too intense
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Cuts
are too jumpy in certain places
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Sound
effect when the match was thrown in the house was too dramatic for what
happened
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Conversation
at the end needed to be more audible